Update (09-Jul-2022)


Hi All,

Just want to give a quick update. This week was quite productive. There are two big things to note.

  1. I've re-written the 3 scenes in the cargo bay and added them to the game. Two of them will come with new art, as well. I'm pretty happy with the new writing, but I'm keen to see what you all think.
  2. I've added a new doll art to the game. It's not quite finished yet, but I'm sure it will be by the end of the month. The important thing is that the mechanics are working, and it's just a matter of sliding the remaining pieces into place. One thing new here is that there will be a button to show the main character with and without her outer clothing. But, her inner clothing will stay on, unless you are able to remove them via obligations. In next month's release, there will only be 1 view angle, but I plan to release 2 more view angles for the doll, in the follow 2 to 4 months.

I've also wrapped up a bunch of minor things.

  1. I double checked that the miniskirt obligation can be offered. Looks like that's still okay, it's just that there are a lot of possible obligations at that point or later.
  2. I reduced the impact officer personalities have on the station's harassment chance, down from a base of 3% to 2%. Let's see how this changes the feel of the game. Right now, it feels like harassment occurs a bit less early on, which is probably good.
  3. I've added a confirmation step, if you choose to end the game early, from being able to pay off the debt. Now, if you accidentally click on "end game early", the game will ask you are you sure, with yes and no buttons.

Alright, the next steps are:

  1. Do some polishing and testing. For example, I need to go back and update the obligation text, to reflect some of the new doll artwork.
  2. Rewrite the scenes where the officers ask to inspect what underwear the main character is wearing. I think I can make the writing in these scenes better. But more importantly, these scenes currently don't really acknowledge what underwear she is wearing, if anything. That's the main part I want to change. Also, it doesn't make sense for this scene to trigger, if the main character isn't wearing a top in the first place.
  3. Add scenes for when personnel or VIPs are loaded or unloaded onto the plane.

For 2 and 3, I've already begun planning and some writing. However, I don't think they will be included in the next release. Instead, they will probably be released in the end of August, possibly alongside another view angle for the doll.

Cheers!

Get Delivery Pilot: Dreams and Debts

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Hi, thanks for the progress report :-)

I'm eager to see the new doll art, and the new writing.
About the inner clothing view, I'm a little bit divided. On the one hand, you sometimes have to wait really long until you see the panties in the current version, so the new view would be great. On the other hand, if you get the inner view for free, it greatly reduces the reward for the obligations of the outer layers. For me, I would prefer having no inner view, but good scenes where the inner obligations are presented. Maybe you could think of unlocking the inner view only if there are obligations for the inner layers.

I also wouldn't care too much about different view angels. Currently, I almost never look at the backside view. It is a nice to have, but nothing important.

Minor things:

1. I can confirm that the miniskirt obligation is still available, had it on my last run.

2. Great, I'm curious to see its effect on hard mode.

3. Useful.

Next steps:

1. Polishing and testing is always good.

2. Good in terms of immersion.

3. Personnel transport and high level obligations are currently the things I miss most, because these are the points there the game feels incomplete. But don't rush it because of me ;-) I know good writing takes time, and you have to find your own balance between programming, writing, and game balancing to keep your motivation for the project.

Hey, thanks!

"On the other hand, if you get the inner view for free, it greatly reduces the reward for the obligations of the outer layers. For me, I would prefer having no inner view, but good scenes where the inner obligations are presented."

Yeah, that's definitely a good point. I was thinking about this earlier, and you reminded me of something that I forgot about. In the scenes where the officer inspects the main character's lingerie, I wanted to make it so that she leaves her skirt or shirt off during the whole meeting. She only puts it back on when she leaves the office. So, when she is asking the officer for work or for a pay increase, she has to do it while she is also topless or in her panties. Actually, I can still do that, and it would be like you said, a scene where the inner obligation is presented.

"I know good writing takes time, and you have to find your own balance between programming, writing, and game balancing"

Yeah, it's really true. You know what I find really hard about writing? Programming is something I can do, no matter how I'm feeling. I know what algorithm I want to use, or how I plan to structure some data. But writing is something that I have to be in the right mood for. If I'm distracted or stressed out or not in a good mood, it's very hard to write a scene with any feeling in it, lol. Therefore, whenever I'm struck with inspiration or the mood to write, I always try to take advantage of it.

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Hey, thanks for another status update !


Happy with new events in cargo bay, new art as well. I just love checking if behaviour of loading crew changes based on MCs outfit/fame. :D

Hopefully new doll will be more feminine :P Underwear view is a nice touch - sometimes you're forgetting what deals you have on each station :P


Sorry for false alarm with miniskirt obligation /:

Harassment chance didn't have noticeable difference for me, but we'll see.

So that end game early button is less scary now    - though still don't see the point of it :P

    

Worry not, you'll be switftly modified when some old doll leftover text has been left :P

Sanity check with underwear is probably the biggest immersion breaker in the game right now. Looking forward for your overhaul and more details describing her lingerie ;)

Perfect - personnel/VIP transport is last game component feeling completely TBD, cannot wait :D


Don't push yourself, you're already doing steady progress :)

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Thanks, good to hear! Sounds like my priorities are in the right place, then.