Delivery Pilot: Dreams and Debts

First, nice game. I wished I would not have found it ;) - To many ours gameplay

Some suggestions / questions:

*Name: -Give the Name yourself

*Infinite Mode: -no infinite anymore, but the option to continue, after you payed your dept

*Mission: -She wants to be a pilot, why does it cost moral?

*Evening activities: -need to pay for some activities, like gym

-option to stay at home and for example play a game

-opportunity to make friends, at the bar and be able to invite them

-possibility for robbery

-meeting with officers with different rules an outcomes

*Ship: -needs gas, cost different on the stations and maybe not available on every station

-random repair costs -cheaper if you do something for the engineer

*sten officers: -even requests?

*Cloth: -Needs to purchase it first and options to choose

-possibility that cloth gets ripped 

-option not the wear what was requested

*Free-day: -needs to take every x day off

-opportunity to do something over the day, not just rest

*Officer requests: -they can ask later for a tattoo, piercing, or different hair 

*random Harassed: -option how to react, not only accept 

-get a little used to it

I know its a lot, but maybe there is something that you can consider 

A question, in the first screenshot seems you have more customization options for a new game, but in game I can't see seem.

How I can see those options when starting a new game, please?

Thanks.

I like the game, very fun if you are into management games.

I don't know if anyone suggested before, but some inter links in the manual would be very helpful. i.e. If you click on an officer, you go to their profile, if you click on a base, you go to it's profile.

Keep it going, you do a very  good job.  I am starting following. Also any patreon or something like that ?

This is pretty good, can't wait to see it progress!

Played several times, Easy mode, it's easy to pay all the loan sharks.Hard mode basically did not exceed 100 days.

Hard, mission chance 60%,Sometimes two days in a row without a task, it's easy to fail. After no task, the probability should increase.Maybe it could be designed to bribe or seduce an officer and get the job?

Good start so far but I have a lot of gripes with the game. I'm just going to share how I feel about what is actually there, don't take it as gospel. 

I wish the game jumped straight to the loading cargo scene when accepting a mission, or going straight to living quarters after unloading, or sleeping automatically after you indulged into the MC interests . 

At least until there's events between those points because moving is useless clicking since there's no choices to be made. Remember, clicking is not fun, making choices and seeing the results is fun. 

Also you need to visit and introduce yourself to everyone and repeat for requesting missions, it's a lot of busy work. I wish the visit button was, "introduce -> Request work-> accept mission" and you added a "ask for better pay above" You could get rid of the visit menu entirely. 

I noticed you have to accept the request for better paid for the relationship to progress, that wasn't exactly clear at first. And since you need lvl2 for moving to the superior ranks, a better relationship usually mean "ok you can do that to me next time" and then ghosting the officer, visiting only when all superior officers and friendly officers had no work and you got too much moral. 

If you had a chance to meet them when going to the office instead of only when visiting, you would open possibilities for a variety of other scenes. Currently the only scene acting a bit differently is arranged dating and that's a massive yike. Usually being molested is 2 or 3 morale you can easily dodge while missing on your evening is usually skipping 6 or more moral. 

Gap between difficulty lvl are pretty wide. I would prefer if easy normal and hard had 90% 80% 70% instead of the current 100% 80% 60%. Easy fully take away a mechanic and hard is very RNG reliant right now. 

I like the writing even if I would likely use the metal cap of my boots to kick the tibia of the guy laying his hand on me instead of making a scene, I guess reactions would be a future feature. The harassment is weirdly overt, it feels a lot like high school. I have a hard time imagining a military officer molesting openly a woman on the job but that's just a nitpick. 

After playing the game on the web for a while, I liked it very much, and then downloaded the game. The game runs in full screen, the window mode cannot be set.

I like the progress of the game and its definitely more manageable but im wondering when the art will be updated. The scenes arent really exciting since they are rough and character is just A posing. But very promising imo keep up the good work.

do you have any plans to add in milestone rewards?  or roguelike aspects? make it far enough into a run, earn enough money, have enough extra cash,  do enough missions, be harassed enough times, etc... and then you unlock some sort of permanent bonus that help in later runs, like starting off with certain clothes already gone/ "improved", more officers of a certain type, less missions needed for a rank up, etc.. I ask this because it takes hours to get deep enough into a run to start seeing end game clothing options (and events? although I haven't seen any) 

bugs/ issues i encountered in my 300 day playthrough

the only bug ive seen so far is a bug with clothing. i had reg skirt, sheer panties, sheer bra, clevage, and still had the jacket. and one of the officers asked for the short skirt and it didnt show up, it just stayed as the regular skirt. later i also the request to wear no shirt, at the same station, and it also failed to show up. exiting to main menu and reloading did not fix the issue. (edit) it happened on other stations as well, can't tell what might have caused it.

an issue ive run into is when leveling an officer to level 4 and level 6, they just give you the pay raise with no request. its so much work for nothing.

another issue ive run into is that refusing a request only hurts you. i thought it might reroll the request but so far it's only ever been the same request. 

I can't seem to download the new version of the game. Have you made it browser only?

I made it to day 80, 101 and 120 on separate runs, here are my thoughts.

sexual progression. It takes forever to get the pilot to any significant level of change in clothing. With stations seemingly only ever having 4 officers to gain quests from, and some of those officers never asking her to wear less clothes, it can feel futile to play. Especially with my 120 day run, I had to hard focus on getting people to lvl 2 then working on majors and colonels to get enough money to last that long, which made it impossible to try and get her to minimum clothing on any station. the best i've been able to do is 5 clothing changes, and even then it doesn't feel that substantial. It might feel better if every level gave 2 clothing changes or an "event" but even then im not sure. And with it taking a total of 1/3/6/10 quests to gain progression with an officer, if you have a "useless" officer or if they ask for date/ kiss/ grope, it feels like a curse (for the player) as opposed to the progression it should feel like.  I think my real problem with it is. is the game supposed to be a survive as long as you can game, or a porn game. At least currently it feels like you have to play the game one way or the other, and just never be satisfied with your result. Personally I would prefer this to be a porn game with a bit of a challenge. Not a challenge game with a bit of porn. But that might just be me.

"useless" officers. There are officers that not only give you less money for doing their quests, but they also never ask for the pilot to do any favors or change clothing. this feels like a weird trap to put in. Maybe if they were changed to give more money but never ask for favors it would feel better. But again this takes away from why we're (i'm) playing the game, to see the pilot (presumably) turned into a slut. 

I think you should modify the introduction system so that the player knows who is subordinate to who from the beginning  and can only interact with majors, colonels and the general after they have enough levels with their subordinates to gain quests from them. seems a little odd that a random delivery pilot can walk up to the the general on day 1 and bug them for a job.

Too many stations. for the current gameplay loop i think 10 station is just a bit too much, especially when you have stations with only 4 quest givers on them. If you make the game a bit easier I think 10 stations will be fine but for now i think 6-8 stations all with 5-6  officers will feel better to play.

Dates. I only made it to the lvl 1 dates and im not sure if there are higher tiers of it in the game yet, but i think dates should A) give a monetary bonus B)give a moral bonus. I know these things are supposed to be negative but the dates in game seem pretty alright? It seems like a nice/fine evening so a couple (-2-5) moral points would be nice and maybe a tip if the pilot does something extra ;)

missing a payment. I think you should have a relationship value with the loan shark that you can increase by doing favors, I.E. he tells you to do a quest for a specific officer at the beginning of the week, contraband deliveries (high relationship gain, low income gain) or more personal favors. and when you miss a payment while having high enough relationship value he will pay off that weeks payment without counting it towards the fail limit. 

Moral. Moral is a bit rough in the early-mid game but by the end game you have enough moral gain from evening events that it doesn't matter. Maybe add an evening event where you can trade moral for money. would also help for squeezing out that last little bit of money you need sometimes.

Moral loss from doing deliveries. currently it seems random how much moral you lose from from doing a quest. I think this should be changed to the further away the delivery location is, the more moral you lose. Or just make the moral loss from the mission more apparent when accepting it.

difficulty. Currently this game is very hard. If it was a roguelike were you gain long term progression at the end of a run i could understand it. but as it stands it just feels difficult for difficulties sake.

officer spread. It would be nice if you could limit stations to having no less than 3 captains on them, otherwise its really easy to miss out on quests.

also, Please make it so that they always give quests, I have had 4 days in row without being able to accept a quest. its honestly awful.

Sorry if i came across as very negative but i do really enjoy the game, but after my 3rd playthrough really trying to make it as far as i can and see as much of the pilot as i could, I feel a little defeated by the apparent futility of it. BUT i do look forward to seeing this game grow and expand and i can't wait for the next update!

Interesting game.

IMHO, too many unnecessary clicks. But to make them less will require dialog system redo.

One thing to consider: rename "ask to pay more" button into "lvl up relations".

One question: at what points does MC changes outfit to match station requirements?

Fun little game ! 

Definitely on the more difficult side, managed to lose at 15k range - so about 10% into the game.

Deals affecting her attire were great - hoping on more interaction between her and capitans/passengers/crew, depending on state of outfit, like lifting the skirt if she have it equipped. Also would be nice if certain harassments, like photos could have additional effects. 

Really appreciated the harassment graphics - hope variations based on outfits to be implemented - as well as more situational events like certain outfit/deal + certain relax location could lead to other events - good and bad.

Also hope character avatar could be polished up - there's some improvements to be made I believe ;)

Few QOL changes would be appreciated:

1. Numbers next to menu choices for pure keyboard access

2. Don't understand the purpose of 'Mission Details' button in cockpit

3. Don't understand difference between the colored locations - it appears red pays less + cargo crew are more handsy, while blue locations are oppossite

5. Some short tab/description of current port, like made deals, present officers, etc.

Oh and I'm personally absolutely okay with focus on groping, stripping, skimpiness and embarrassment - not many games go this path...

Will keep an eye on development !